4.10.2005

My end result

Here's my 100-word something. In retrospect, 100 words is cutting it a tad short. Live and learn, I guess.

It always starts with a murmur, and ends with a sting.

I'd just been stung, but if I played my cards right it wouldn't be the end. The blonde bitch with the smoking gun was an amateur. Assumed I was dead.

Big fucking mistake

She hadn’t even taken my gun. Too bad I needed to take her alive to trace the hit.She’d given me her number back at the bar. I dialed it slowly on my cell, without her noticing. A phone rang. She turned to answer it.

Fucking amateur.

I threw my pistol at the back of her head.It struck home and she fell limp on the floor. "That'll be 200 bucks honey," she said in a barely comprehendible slur.

12 comments:

  1. Violence..cool..Nothing better than bitch slapping an amateur.

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  2. heh. There are many ways that can be taken. I like most of them ;)

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  3. sounds like a drug bust to me.. then again, anytime i read "trace the hit" or anything close to it, i think drugs Drugs DRUGS.

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  4. sigh the romantic in me veiws you as the good cop kicken ass and not bother to take names.

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  5. I refer to leave it all open to interpretation.

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  6. ahhh, versatility rocks! *applause*

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  7. Suitably open to interpretation. Very nicely done EW!

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  8. got mine up on my blog

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  9. Mine are up on my blurty, and I actually liked the 100 word limit. We all know how verbose I am, and we all know why as well (God knows I love to hear myself talk). I await the next gaunlet to be thrown with much antici....

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    (anyone get it?)

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  11. Wow.... just wow..... What is the world coming to old friend?

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